by sexgundam666
This is oddly similar to the concept of Death Note, an anime tv series.
I think the story's similarity to Death Note is on purpose. The thing is called a Futa Note, works exactly the same way (without the dying part), a daemon follows her around, and she has a hidden drawer trap that torches the book. The author probably watched or read Death Note and decided to do their own spin on it. It's simpler to think of it like a doujinshi (a fan made parody).
That wasn't really working out for me, so I instead went with the premise and did a mostly original story around it. Unlike Light/Kira the main character won't be going crazy with the notebook just yet.
PS. Death Note is one of my favourite animes.
By far the best futa story out there. I'm a huge fan of your work and I hope you can churn out more of this high quality stuff soon. Littlery dying to see what happens next. Kinda hoping the mom or sister get accidentally dragged into it at some point
As always, your stories are so fun and full of great ideas. I rarely find well-written futa and expansion writing, but you definitely get the job done. I need to take some notes for a future giant-cock series I'm writing...
this series is a good read. you could be making money on this if you wrote the other chapters and sold them all in a book, i would buy. honestly cant wait for the continuation. you have a succubus' seal of approval.
This whole series is a great sexual version of the anime. Please do not end it like the anime.
Af everything ive read on this sit on futa you have some of the best and i feel like there is so miluch left undone on this. You should add more chapters, if i wasnt broke id pay for more. Please think of more this is an awesome story and your an awesome writer.
I found the idea pretty much fucked up. First chapter - interesting. Second chap - creepy.