by sexgundam666
I check this site several times a week looking specifically for the continuation of the story. Loving the direction it's heading.
Seven chapters in and I'm still loving this series. Great work and I hope there's much more to come. I can't wait to see what happens to Mary next.
My only complaint is the lack of measurements, even just rough estimates of length/size (there are a few, but not enough) would be titillating to hear about. Though I suppose no measurements is better than measurements that are incongruent with what you've described. Oh, there is one other thing though, Carmen's perspective is pretty much the least interesting one to read about—at least in my opinion.