by sexgundam666
...a breakthrough! How interesting, now I'm very interested in what's going to happen
This is a wonderful addition. Thank you for posting. Each of the characters and their issues were brought to the fore rather than left in the background. And they have grown despite complications of the plot. It's very well done. =)
Please keep going. What awaits next is as tantalizing as desert after dinner! =)
I know I'm late to the party, but there usually aren't that many stories that I actually get invested in to the point I read for leisure. ยด
This one, though, with such character development, is most outstanding to me. Yes, there is the sexual part and so on, but the narrative itself is very good as well. I'd totally pay for a book on this.