All Comments on 'Futanari Sexperiment Ch. 01'

Interesting concept, I think this could be good, Ch 2 will tell! love it so far!

I enjoyed chapter one. If a story can pull me in within the first couple of pages then I know there is potential for a wonderful read. Good start, great character development. Keep up the fine work. I look forward to chapter 2. Just a little constructive criticism and by no means took anything away from the story for me. There are a few words in the story that for some reason we’re missing letters. Not so much a typo, seemed more like it was typed but the button stuck or didn’t depress all the way. No biggie just wanted to let you know. I know I miss things in my own writing when I was proof reading it multiple times. Only to find I catch it well after I have written and released it. Again, cheers. Looking forward to starting on some of your other stories. Recommendations?

It’s been six months, are we ever getting part 2?

Ded

He got laid, AND he didn't get murdered, so this is just awful.