by EileenAndrews
Fun twist at the end. A little fast and furious for me.. but the theme of the story pretty much dictated that, so it's believable. Keep writing!
Excellent story with a wonderful twist ending. Did not see it coming at all.
Sweet is not something one says as a review for an erotic story, but it seems to be the best word here.
That was an enjoyable read. Thank you.