All Comments on 'Gabriel'

Wow! That took a surprising twist. Beautifully written! This has Poe vibes in it. Awesome.

the sickest thing i have ever read, is there no sense of decency?

Please remove this horrible story literotica!![ read more]............ I am with this one. It is so sick.

Having heard the erotic story by this writer I was drawn to this and was dragged into another story even though it was not of erotica it was a tension filled story and a clever end which one needs with a good horror story....Please write more

freaky, but this is literotica, not horror stories

I did like it however.

Decent story, rather scary.

Stephen King-ish with a sort of Poe quality maybe?

If this is the worst you've seen, I would be quite surprised. There are stories on this site rated through the roof which portray incest in all of its forms. Yet you can't handle a little horror story? You think THIS is the place where decency dies? Change your nappies and move on, sweetie. ;)

the sickest thing i have ever read, is there no sense of decency?

Please remove this horrible story literotica!!