All Comments on 'Gabrielle and Melissa'

Now I need a shower 2:)

A little terse. Great story, good character development. Felt a bit rushed. Take your time, enrich, and then write chapter 2.

Thanks!

felt like it was written by a guy jacking off. Please slow down a bit. We want some romance or seduction; not just ramming.

So fucking hot

Arrrrggghhh

I wish it were real and I would join

But yeah add more romance and a

Third person even hotter ;)

Wow, I love the how you described everything.:D

Omg that was so hot!!!! U made me want that. Well written

As in, I peed myself. This story needs a disclaimer: reading this story can increase heart rated, make your eyes roll up in the top of your head, and increase sensation in the genital area possibly leading to an orgasm.

i fucked my clit so hard reading this story i wish i had another clit to rub aagainst