All Comments on 'Gab's Seduction'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Friends with benefits

Have always found it great when a friend turns into a lover - that tentative advance being rewarded by passion that had built up over time. Always the hottest sex as all of that pent up emotion gets released over and in me

Great story, great sex

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Loved it.

I am so jealous. I so wish that would happen for me.

sj_53sj_53over 6 years ago
Great Story

I love how Gab came around to loving your attention. It kind of sneaked up on me. I would have expected it to take more persuasion, but I guess when you are ready yore are ready. A happy ending. Nothing better than having a friend with benefits. Who knows where that may lead. Very well written. 5 stars.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

Mmmm so fucking hot.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Great except for the end

It was all great, but the end felt rushed...

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

Good story but ending g forced and trite

ptscuriousptscuriousover 2 years ago

Another good well written story, my only criticism is there is not enough focus on the Cock Sucking, for me and my tastes that is, I really wished you were as descriptive about Cock Sucking as you are about Fucking, as your descriptions of Fucking are so enjoyable to read.

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