All Comments on 'Galactic Slave Ch. 01'

I like the idea behind this story.

I would also like to see the bozo who sells here into slavery get screwed over.

A "Federation" that doesn't protect its citizens against this kind of treatment does not deserve to exist. Let's hope that it will be overthrown by something more civilized!

A good opener to a long story. i must say thatis an unusual way to get ahead in business.

i see that as usual there is someone complaining about the story. i wonder how many Americans would complain if slavery were reintroduced into the USA. All it needs is a judge to convict someone to slavery no laws have to be changed (13th or 15th Amendment). So it would not be surprising for a loose Federation to accept a members laws.

Thank you Master Dweaver for this wonderful piece of fiction.

wish it was me captured,raped and collared as a slave girl! its a great story

More than a Federation, it seems to be a Confederation, as State/Planet Laws are at the center

Are you aware your story has been plagiarized by somebody named Robin Scott and is being offered on Amazon? Well, it has.

The question of why this individual was sold, inexplicably, into slavery and in such a maniacal manner was never addressed. This definitely leaves the reader guessing as to the motives for the vile act. More context is required.