by dweaver999
Love this series and the themes you are developing. Please keep on a roll with it.
Fantastic. I would like to see something about Susan's transition from slave to wife.
I am surprised that they do not continue to use the slave guise for Susan because it would give them an advantage.
i am confused about susan crystal's base. where is it? its host supposedly died. couldnt another member of the hellfire group have reimplanted it? is it still just lying in the corpse? what about the energy it needs to live? unless i misread the story, it didnt die & they didnt retrieve it
getting better all the time and your not makeing as many type-os as before which interfered with the enjoyment of the story