All Comments on 'Galactic War Ch. 09'

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grizx over 6 years ago

Excellent twist

One of my favorites, the "didn't see that one coming" plot twist. The editing help is noticeable and appreciated. Keep up the good works, I have a smile on and am looking forward to the next chapter.

Anonymousover 6 years ago

me or I

Just a note on grammar .

" Anna and me exchanged gazes and were pretty startled by this change."

To get to the correct form, separate the sentences:

Anna exchanged gazes and was pretty startled by this change.

me exchanged gazes and was pretty startled by this change.

See? now the correct form is obvious. "Anna and I".

"Anna and I exchanged gazes and were pretty startled by this change."

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