All Comments on 'Galaxy of Terra'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Very sweet

I hope theres more to cum

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
so very sweet

lovely story , reading this made me cry. i hope to read more thank you.

SmileyPappasSmileyPappasalmost 7 years ago
"Tell me how people on your planet made life."

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Awesome story! Unique setting and great writing--strong verbs, concise but vivid descriptions, clever dialogue. I'm thinking how in the world having sex with a giant snail would work, but you figured it out. Nice ending too. Keep it up!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Lovely...

...and bittersweet tale. Thank you.

JJMemaw0623JJMemaw0623almost 7 years ago
Beautiful!

What a beautiful love story. So sad, but so very unique. Please keep writing!! Excellent job!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Great!

very creative plot, excellent writing - thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
So beautiful

This story paints a massive universe and an intimate story of love in just two short pages. I loved it.

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