All Comments on 'Gambling My Daughter Ch. 1-2'

I love sweet little girls like this that are so nasty and do such nasty things.

your english is so poor that it destroys your story

In paragraph three you change from telling us, your readers, that you have been having sex with your daughter since she was eighteen, to talking directly to your daughter and telling her how she kissed your lips. Which is it? Are you talking to us, your readers, or is this a letter to your daughter? You can't have it both ways! Spellcheck and proof readyour work!!

If you don't know basic grammar, don't write...Please

sugardaddy, please study a bit grammar before you write another story.

I'm not a fan of pissing !!

I've only been with one woman who wanted to taste my piss. I filled her mouth and she loved it, and swallowed. Golden showers added kink to this story. Can't wait to read the next part.