All Comments on 'Game Night Ch. 01'

You better keep going!!

more, more ...encore!!!! haven't enjoyed a card game like that since Germany......nudist77@hotmail.com

Do re-read before submitting. For instance, what exactly is a "nicely trimmed <i>bus</i>"? (And I would rather we didn't swing off into gay sex: no prejudice, it just does nothing for me.)

please.

A great start, Can not wait to read Chap 2. I note Erotonaut comments - it is so frustrating when you miss minor errors no matter how many times you proof read a story. However on his “gay” comment I have to disagree. The options open to a writer with four bi-sexual characters is tremendous and should be thoroughly investigated. Readers can always skip sections that are not to their taste. Keep up the good work.

Good story. Good card game. Can't wait for the next installment. Only complaint? - Not long enough. Write more!

Awesome story! More more more!