by sadbluekid
Really enjoyed this. Good story, nothing too extreme. Liked the characters too. Particularly enjoyed the scene in the restaurant where Jane asked Mandy for her panties. The interaction with Mandy was actually quite unexpected but was a really welcome twist.
I gave this the full 5 stars as it was just my kind of story (everybody having fun). Hope you decide to continue it.
You really do write some of the best Femdom stuff around. For me anyway.
More please!