by ChelseaTay
Wow, I like the different story line.A spoiled privileged wolf.
My deepest sympathies to Colton. I imagine his feelings and pride are hurt at the moment.Looking forward to see how this plays out in future chapters. Well done
I'm hooked and I can't wait for this series to unfold please continue
Wow! Airami is sure full of herself. I feel sorry for her mate if she carries on like he should be worshipping her. They should be worshipping each other. And whats up with her assumptions of Colton? She already got something against Colton before she get to know him...so immature and not lady like.
I can't wait to see how Colton reacts once they are away from everybody. Colton will have to put his foot down with Airami.
Airami is 100% spoilt however it is completely apt to her upbringing. She's grown in the lap of luxury with power over everyone. To suddenly have that knocked from beneath your feet would be unsettling for anyone. You can tell she's unhappy to be brought out of her comfort zone. I hope she opens up to her mate in time and let's him balance and comfort her.
Your character development is really good, the story of the spoiled alpha bitch and her outsider American mate sounds really interesting.
Can't wait to read where this goes. Please update soon :-))
If both of them are centuries old he would never call her a bubble butt when they were pups. Especially not in England since 'bubble butt' is clearly an American slang phrase originated in the 20th century. I like the story but little slips like that should be avoided. Good luck!
Tee hee hee! Can't wait to see her mate put her in her place! Great story so far. Please post again soon! ~K.
This is a new approach and I'm really interested to see where you take it. I'm not sure I like this woman's personality but I'm definitely intrigued. I like my characters with flaws. I'm excited to know more about her mate. now i just have to remind myself to check back for updates. Hopefully the chapters will be longer???
loved this! agree with the bubble butt comment but other than that I really like this story so far!
I really like this story! I've been waiting for a new chapter and just hope you haven't quit or anything!
please continue! I absolutely LOVE where you are going with this. No pressure, but..hurry up lol ;-)
I'm dieing to see what happens next!! You are an AMAZING writer. :-)
I read both the chapters back to back. You're well written indeed. Love where you are taking this girl. And I have a feeling this male isn't her mate come to see where she took off to. Keep them coming. I'm thoroughly interested in how this plays out.
This is a very interesting and quite original story, won't you please continue writing it with more frequent updates and bring your readers a satisfying finish? Please?
I love this story, I was really exited to see how it was going to turn out! Please please please continue writing!
i really wish you would continue to write more of this story... i really enjoy your story..
Thank you for the character development in Airami. Might be a good idea to have a bit longer chapters, though. If the 1st chapter would include the current ch. 1-2, one wouldn't be as prone to stop reading the next one.