by ChelseaTay
Beginning to be one of the best stories I've read on here in a long time. Congrats & please continue.
Airami keeps saying that Colton has to prove himself to her, shouldn't that work both ways? The only thing she is proving is that she is arrogant and is an immature brat. Her behavior is partly because of the way she was raised but there is no call for her to be disrespectful and combative. How would she feel if Colton was behaving as she is? She wouldn't feel too good thats for sure and her brother would be ready to launch an attack on Colton.
If she keeps up with the bitchy attitude the new pack will notice and hate her. Also, it would look bad on Colton for her to carry on this way. It probably would be less stressful on her if she gave a little. She isn't the only that had their life changed.
Imagine you were the joint head of a powerful family, with all the power and prestige that entailed. Imagine you'd held that position for decades, centuries even. Imagine waking up one morning with nothing more stressful to deal with than an upcoming social event. Now imagine that before the night is out, you're served notice to quit all this and embark on a new life halfway around the world with a man you've never set eyes on before. Cut the lady some slack. Nobody reacts well to sudden change, and to be honest it would be a boring and unrealistic story if they did. I suspect I'm not the only one who would find it easier to suspend disbelief over shape changing aristocrats than a strong willed woman turning her back on her whole life without a fight of some sort.
Love reading about the dance between two people... this was a great chapter. :)
If male alphas had to give up everything they knew, I'm sure they would be more than bitchy.
Yay
You're back. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Plsssss don't make the wait long ☺
This is a well written story ChelseaTay. I have no issues with it that I can see. I do implore you to continue to write and update this story. Your work is far to well written to end up like many werewolf stories before yours being incomplete.
This story between Airami and Colton is a fine piece of fiction and a well received addition to the many fine works within literotica. I do hope that you continue to update the story and show us all what you are made of.
This is such a great series please I urge you to go on. The story of Airami and Colton is better then most I have seen so you have to tell it. You are a great writer I know you can do it please give us the story I know you can write.
Is there going to be more? It's only just begun but it's very entertaining and intriguing to read. Please continue writing this. It's been a long time since your last update, it would be great if we were able to finish this story as it is so well written and has an interesting plot and set of characters.
We would like you to please finish the story, you were doing so well. Please 1 more thank you 😊