All Comments on 'Game of Wills'

Nice first submission and welcome to literotica.

Makes me wonder what was his class, though if it was in his name, I apologize, its been far too long since I lived there.

Hey! Thanks for the welcome, it means a lot to me. And I actually imagine Alaron to be a former dock worker. It is less noticeable, than if a hero of sorts go missing, after all.

Also, dem muscles.

Great first story to Literotica! I really enjoyed it! Hope to see more of your literary skills in the future!

Would be nice to see more of such well written femdom :)

The polar opposite of my usual dynamic, lol, but well written.

This is a very hot story--great build-up, and I'm glad you included an element of choice near the end (it's the manipulation of characters into bad but voluntary choices, especially incremental, slippery-slope choices, that I find hottest in these kinds of stories).

I do hope you'll keep writing! And I hope you'll expand around this scene a bit; I'd love to read more about the characters you've introduced.

Please continue this! I need more!

The LHEU sends its regards