All Comments on 'Game Set and Match Pt. 01'

Love the slow build-up. Character development is important. Look forward to more.

Very good indeed, loved the storyline. Keep going

Nice introduction. I'm looking forward to Wednesday too.

And I can't wait for part 2! thanks for sharing this with us!

a good build up is always good, can't wait for the next part

Thanks to everyone for your kind support.

I do hope Part 2 won't be too disappointing for you (I expect it should be online in a few hours). That will be mainly tennis coaching (and maybe a little flirting), but Part 3 has already been submitted and I'm hopeful that will be published before the weekend is over.

Please keep the comments coming - It's the only way I can tell what you like :)

Thanks again.

Macey :)

Very good work, Ms. Macy. A good read, well written with interesting characters. Lynne seems like she would be a very good antagonist to have in the story.

On the other hand, Katie and Julie are both very warm, sympathetic characters that I enjoyed reading about.

This is a very good story. Thank you for this work.

A nice start. Good dialog. Very nice set up and lead in to the coaching segment. Also I'm sensing

Lynne is being setup for a fall, which I'll be happy to see.

5/5

J

Ooops!

Story is displayed twice in succession on my iPhone???

Love it twice over!!

LOL

It's beginning to look like a very good story, I love it can't to read the rest. All I can say is that you do write very well and your experience does indicate a heart for the subject matter. Good job

Yeah its easy beating down someone to inflate your own EGO ...... And so this offer, may i help to increase your performance, before being a trash bag for Lynne, is so filled with empathy with a great mindset ...... And true, playong a game to bringing up your own performance, you have to play against the best to learn ...... After all the gaming should be fun, as it is a hobby

So lovely written ...... 5 stars again as allwayss

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I am giving this five stars because it is such an engaging story! Vocabulary, readability, interest, characterization all check out, and I am especially glad they are getting to know each other before any sex occurs.