by AspernEssling
The love for Jazz and her love for him is obvious. It will be interesting to see how you reconcile all the different romantic possibilities. I definitely see a chance with the games becoming so popular for him to start visiting Australia and for Jazz to come back to the states.
Thank you
As per your usual high standards, it was an excellent read. I do miss some of the wry humour that was part of your earlier stories. Not complaining as I really love your work.
Vee needs to try a 32G, then she might be comfortable in a bra.
Great story, but if you start quoting facts you need to at least attempt to get them right. Not even the US has a 37 back size for bras, like the UK it is even numbers only.
This is my second read through so I kind of remember we’re it goes but I was struck by how the storyline reminds me of Cerano De Bergerac. Jazz, of course, playing the title role.
Excellent, tho l must say l am no fan of massive tits, finding them a turn off. My brother’s wife’s and her sisters all have humongous tits as does her daughter. All of them complain bitterly about their tits and the severe backache they cause. Constant pain every day as they get older. They find their tits a turn off as well.
When younger l went out with my share of big titted women. They all complained of the same problem. All wanted breast reduction surgery.
So, l find that a writers dream tits in a story do nothing for me.
But l love this story, so 5/5
Love the story but reading this episode made me a bit less enthusiastic. Vee’s size is just too much and makes it less hot, IMHO.