All Comments on 'Gamers Pt. 10'

Didn't see that coming. But looking back I should have.

I hope this doesnt upset the apple cart. I like dean and vee together. Im gonna be super sad if they goof this up.

If I were Dean this would definitely cause me problems. Vee and the cards are intertwined in Dean's mind. Dean sees the cards as part of Vee's personality and abilities. Knowing that she mislead him about the cards would cause a major rift in his perception of Vee, especially since he still has feelings for Jazz.

However, if Jazz didn't do the board drawings either...

Full Marks.

I am the guy whose dice are cursed. Lol I have even tried banishing them to the freezer on occasion. Regardless. Love this story, love your writing, and from what I can see you have a good editor. Please keep writing and thanks for sharing!

Ahaz

please tell me to buckle up my ears before you blow my mind.

That came out of nowhere. I'll bet she really did draw them but used some source as inspiration. Because of that, she discredits the work she put into the cards especially due to her low self esteem issues. I think elements of style and technique would have been too obvious if Jade had done them.

Amidst all the fuss about Vee, for some reason I get the feeling that Cyn has sold a knock-off version of Amazons to another game maker, meaning that Amazons doesn't get sold. Along the lines of we haven't seen the last of her and she is Jazz's rival so destroying what Jazz put a lot of work into seems like the worst that could happen.

That is some twist at the end! Can't wait for the next chapter.

5*s for all the chapters... make the next one soon!

Great surprise, looking forward to the next chapter!

Amazing story, with an amazing twist at the end.

But the real reason I'm commenting was a misspelling. You put 'Bill' when I pretty sure you meant 'Wil Wheaton' :P

I have already finished the story, and as a gamer I have to say this is kinda the ideal fantasy. Well done.

Didn't see that coming!!!

WHAT

THE

FUCK!?!?!?!

Second response . . .

BEST FUCKING CURVE BALL ON LITEROTICA!!!!

I haven’t been caught that flat footed on a plot twist, especially one that works so well in a story, as this cliff hanger of an ending. It’s 1am, I have work at 8, and I justified the last two chapters with this one to be my last. I’m off to read the next chapter... Thanks for the excellent tale.

Wait,, oh my

Tremendous plot twist

dun. DUN. DUUUUUUU!!!! Holy crap!

What!!!????

What a twist, last chapter too

5/5