All Comments on 'Gameshow Ch. 11'

I totally enjoyed this series of stories. Each flowed easily and kept the readers interest. You got a 'feel' of who the characters were and what they were experiencing. Your stories are a something i look forward to seeing more of. Jane

Excellent story, I can imagine it might happen one day like that.

That was a nice series. Only flaw is when Bink is playing with Carol, some times you call him Howie, which is confusing. I guess it's a honest mistake, just pointing this out. Or maybe it's me who didn't get it...

Will there be a finale episode where we get to see how Nancy pays for her school and sort of see what effects his participation in this game had for her? and maybe get some Bink and Carol action to boot! ;)

Yes, there is an epilogue coming.

Yes, there will be an epilogue.

I'm sorry, you are correct the names were mixed up a few times. I've submitted a corrected version and hope it will show up soon.

Interesting story and your characters: Nancy and Carol are

great ;)

But, wish it was a little bit more erotic.

I enjoyed the stories --unusual setting and theme, not to mention a seminary student's faith being tested.... how delicious. They got off to a slow start and I wish some of the short, one-page chapters would be conected into a single longer one to keep the flow going without having to return to the index so often.

I was hoping to see Nancy wind up getting it up the ass; but the mouth was a good second choice and allowed for her mortification and the display/swallowing gambit.

While it's fun to see Carol dragged into the action, I thought the action with Carol's boobs was "over the top" literally and figuratively -- and perhaps unnecessarily cruel.

I noticed the name confusion; and note that the author has been made aware of it; however, it has not been corrected yet.

A lot of interesting ideas and they were well execute. A couple of name switches but I didn't get hung up on them. Just REALLY enjoyed it. Thanks again.