All Comments on 'Gaming: D&D Pt. 04'

Ending made me laugh for some reason.

Didn't realize you put two up. Great story, wonderful cliffhanger. I can't wait to see how the night ends.

I have loved the series so far... the ending was great... can't wait to see what happens in the morning.

God i feel his pain. I've been there. That being said, our hero needs to clear the deck and look for the real Cinnamon girl.

As much as I feel bad for Ian, hopefully this ultimately leads him to the girl that truly likes him.

You evil bastard

Really enjoying this one

It looked like a 75 yard td pass to the running back that had slipped past his defender, but the rb tipped it into the air, his defender catapulted over his shoulder, snatched the ball and returned it for an opposing team, game-winning score.

The fans left the the stadium in a bedraggled hush.

The rb stayed in the locker room until 2AM when he'd trudged the 7 miles home, in the wet, sticky snow.

"The only conclusion I could reach was that I didn't have a clue what I was doing. "

It never gets any easier )

Great story. Keeps getting more interesting.

Oops!

I really enjoy that your characters are "real"---with strengths AND weaknesses. Your protagonist is both thoughtful AND shallow. Like most of us ;)

I have always pursued cinnamon girls and always thought of this song. And I knew Tanya picked the wrong room ... I think I’ve read too many of your stories to be surprised.

Oh, Derek! Shit!

Great chapter, really advances the story as it gives more insight into the characters. Then she comes to Ian in the night and Ian and the reader are slapped across the face with the final line. I often see such things coming but not this time. Excellent job!

Wow, you got me there. Great story!