All Comments on 'Gaming: D&D Pt. 05'

I've seen some of your other stuff and now I have been reading this so far. It seems you have the main character gain--and lose several girlfriends over the course of several chapters before finding "the one" they stick with at the end. While there isn't anything wrong with drama like that, it's not something I like reading about so I think I will end here. You write well, good luck.

Well done!

and into the (phew!) fire.

To paraphrase the Aerosmith song, get "back in the saddle again," Ian!

If the ending to this story is Ian realizing him and Parvani are supposed to be together then I'm going to be highly disappointed

Your writing is superb and I love this story.

You are my new go to story teller. Third time reading this one. Felt the pain in my chest. The dull ache that never fades.

A lot of this sounds like it could have been straight out of my life! The books, music and people. Just not as dark. It is seriously giving me flashbacks.

Fantastic story and well written.

I wish i had made the decision that Ian did...

I cant believe it took me this long to realize the names were intentional. I love it lol. And the story is phenomenal. This is my first of yours, I'm definitely going to read the others after I finish it.

I really love your story, it feels so real that I can fell that I'm there, if like I'm invited to remember with them things of the past and cried a little at the end of the chapter to tell you the truth

Had a feeling this would end up happening with Jen, really sad

Great story

Of course. Fuuuuck. Dagger to the heart. Building slowly to a true love ending with Par though? Old friends turn into new lovers?

Excellent chapter with hope and success and pain that may remind the reader of times past. At least it did for me. Looking forward to seeing where this goes from here.