All Comments on 'Ganging Up On Love'

I cannot place myself into the scene. If a couple of these babes were married and one left her bush grooming long because husband preferred with a third party telling of the tale, perhaps a bigger number would have been achieved.

Very interesting how you have approached the 2pov in your story, and how you held on the air of mistery until close to the end. Keep them going!

Check mine too, the style of writing is similar to yours.