All Comments on 'Gargarean Group Ch. 05'

Are for your excellent creative writing. I was not really excited about the content. The way David was introduced to the group was bordering on assault. He was coerced and in his confused innocence he finally accepted his fate. The whole approach could have been less demeaning.

I'd like to read the story of the cock-tail of Eddie and Jim. :D

I can't wait to see where you go with the photography story line. Wonder if they will snap pics of any other new experiences ;-)