All Comments on 'Gasping Ridiculous Quiet Things'

As a man I always want my woman to do this and she down its good to know how she feels when she is doing it and I'm not responsive

It is the middle of the night and I too am wide awake and dripping wet. Husband is snoring, perhaps I should...

Love how the chopped sentences convey the ragged pace of what's happening. Oh ... and it's totally hot, too!

so good that I thought it was written just for me...

Well impressed by this story, its raw and sexy and god knows how many times I've laid in the night, thinking just this...

Wow, I know what I will be dreaming about tonight.

This is a great storyline, but the writing was even better. Excellent pacing.

Thanks for sharing this.

Love your straight forward description of a universal fantasy! Well done.