All Comments on 'Gathering Fallen Rocks Ch. 01'

cant wait to find out what happens

I love this. There is not much more I can say. You've set up the background, I already have a vested interest in these characters and I want to follow them. Who cares that the sex isn't right in front of your face and that there is no cum shot within the first 3 paragraphs. This is going to be a wonderful piece of literature.

The best thing about this story is that the chapters will out quickly. I really enjoyed this beautiful tale & can't wait for the next chapters. Again, thank you for sharing this beautiful tale with us.

She needs to stand up to her old life and change things that she doesn't like. Running away will just take her problems with her. Thanks for the good chapter....Rich

to see your Muse is back in operating mode. Been missing your good writing.

Doleke

this my first time reading your writing and I am impressed.

now jset hear me wwelkl and hear good

Do. not. ever. apoligize. for writing. and. taking. up. Reader's. TIME.

I dont know you, but this first part is damn good...I have not tried writin want to, but I can sure read a lot and I can tell trash from what ain't.

Now I maybe an old fart of the ancient age of 61 or so but I know good writin when i cze it cause I been reading damn near as soon as I could walk.

Dont get me started on that TV thing

ahyway I am Butch Davies.auhunter04 @ Yahoo.com should you ever want to debate your stinking apoligy, wwe don need no aploogy ewe gots dat ??

You ever say sumpin like that again I crawl thru this monitor and whoop your butt, but then maybe not, cause you might like that...hugs

Butch