All Comments on 'Gathering Fallen Rocks Ch. 02'

Enjoying it so far, keep writing.

Using the letters to reveal Gail's background and explore her character is neat. Looking forward to more letters. :)

I find your approach to story telling to be intriguing. I am glad that there is more in this series and other of your works for me to read.

Every one she knows has fucked over her, and I don't think that the letters are going to do anything to help her.It is a good way to lay the foundation of her crappy life. Her convoluted life has caused her to be bitter and wanting to end it all. I hope that this new poor soul will give her something to live for. ..... Very well writen and well planned out. Thanks for the good chapter..........Rich

this is butch again,

read this part, no reason to change what I said, repition gets boring

except"oncore"

( I hold with Will Rodgers ifn ya knows who I mean... he said any man is a damn fool that cannot think of more than one way to spel a word)

thanx