All Comments on 'Gathering Fallen Rocks Ch. 04'

I absolutely love this story. The interactions between Gail, Howard and all of the other characters are amazingly real. Living in a Southern border state all of this with Santos rings a familiar bell being that my hometown in an hour and a half from mexico and I have friends that live all along the border. You've captured the controversy so well. Anyway, I love Aunt Jean and what happened to the letters?!!! I can't wait until the next chapter.

Why I love all of 2Xwidderwoman's stories — strong, interesting plots, believable dialog, and the frequent wit, charm and even lyricism with which she carries the reader along. Can't wait for more!

It is really my pleasure reading this story. I really liked it. Thank you for the wonderful chapter.

Your research and knowledge really shows. And it cracks me up b/c my father works for a title company in NJ! Honestly. :) I like the groundwork you've laid and I hope they get the house back. With minimum bloodshed.

Good chapter; good story. I am lovin' your presentation of the history involved. (Not to mention that you are touching on the realities of the problem with the border.) Keep it up!

-- KK in Texas

There is a lot of information about Texas land laws and corrupt county officials in this tale, along with lawyers that are crooked. Land is the only commodity that there isn't anymore being made, and a lot of wars have been fought over it, along of course over religion. That makes this story really believable.The twisting and turning story keeps me interested in finding out what's in the future for the ill fated couple. Ms. widder is spinning quite a complex web of a story. Of course I'm still waiting for Howard to nail Gail, after she heals up a little. Thanks for the good chapter......Rich

I like that you do not seem to take yourself too serious. just when I was thinking I might need to reread Gail's description of requirements, Howard basically says the same. had to laugh at that. this story continues to keep my interest and excite my imagination ... a pleasure to read.

Very Nice 2Xwidderwoman you keep writing and I will keep reading. Thanks for the story.

ya doing good, Iz a southwestern country boy Raised on horse ranch in The evil state of Arizona. Unlike any other stories I have read where one has to give pause to literary license, I have not found any techinical errors or story errors, Y hablo un poco de la lingua tambien. Me gustas sus plabras,,gusto bueno

Butch

I like this story. It keeps getting deeper and deeper. A Great read!