by Olivia_Palmer
All the piss and shit stuff... kind of ruins an otherwise great story.
The piss and shit stuff MAKES an excellent story!
A) where do these people live where there are bars like this (and girls like Macie who frequent them or work in them)? I need to move there.
B) please keep writing, and the more shit and piss and vomit the better! Plus more descriptions of Macie’s adorable little package, how it smells and tastes, etc. Oh, and her squinchy smelly pussy pucker too, please!
C) some snot play and swallowing would drive me right over the edge. Just sayin.