by Steve1613
I would like to see much more of gem's training as pony. Endurance training as well as field work. Samantha's place seems ideal as training site. Sam and gem's owner can take turns overseeing gem's work thus working her literally untill she drops from fatique.
Very nice story, please Keep up the good work.
Grey Master
I like this story because of the detail, some of the implications that I would like to see explored. Dehumanization is a fantasy so seeing how he looks at Gem as less and less human is a turn on. Definitely want to see more!