All Comments on 'Gender Fluid Pt. 01'

HOPE THERE IS A LITTLE MORE TO THIS STORY...! BETTY jo xoxo

It was a tender read as the middle of it got a ittle bit touching with the accident that took two lives. The ending was very loving and passionate looking forward to an encore. As the story is going to prevent us and hopefully into a long-term relationship. Maybe to keep it interesting a pair of remote control butt plugs for him and her would be a cute addition. Since they make butt plugs that can be operated by cell phone they could turn each other's on remotely. Hahaha.

In a way reminded me of The Left Hand of Darkness! step on a very delicate line between quality porn/erotica and the possibility for utter crap. I hope you do well!

I like your writing, but feel I should point out that "Abuse causes transgendering" is an old transphobic trope with no basis in reality and should be avoided.