All Comments on 'Genesis Pt. 01'

by JohnnyMcThunder

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
GREAT START!

I see real story potential here

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Very excited to see where this goes.

Great setup, rare erotic abilities that no one will expect. There are real stakes and I'm hoping going you've got a bunch of this written already!

anonintexas1999anonintexas1999about 6 years ago
good start

I love to see where this leads. Please don't keep us waiting too long.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Sounds interesting

This sounds like it could get good with some base in the anime Sword Art Online I hope to see how the story progresses.

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