All Comments on 'Genie Chronicles Ch. 01'

Great story/series! Your writing is captivating and very professional. Keep writing!

Just the idea drives the story pretty well and so far I like it. I could wish for more story but its still a bit early to tell

Hot... just... hot!! Nothing new when it comes to the sex (except for that floating part... which is weird O.o)

But the entire story of a hot genie being your sex slave is too hot to make this story ordinary.

Fuckin awesome.

Could use more plot but you write so well, it's captivating.

I assume you're a man with a user name like Joe, so I just wanted to congratulate you on writing the traditional "love slave" story without descending into misogyny and ludicrousness (ie: oh, yes, rape me more! I love it!). That may not sound like high praise, but it is around here, believe me.

Of course, I haven't read the whole thing so it may still have oh rape me mores, but as it stands- really well done.

One of the best on all of Literotica. It actually has a plot, and quite a well-built one to boot! Please keep going.

More..I want you to write more of it!

This is really good! I'm enjoying it thoroughly. I guess the best thing about this is that you've already finished it. LOL. <3 Lillian, KR.

Few series are enjoyable enough for me and my wife to read all the way through, but we did so with this one and loved every bit of it. Thank you for such a fun time.

I've been lurking here for a couple of months now and have read most of the stories by the top 15 or so rated authors. (Well, I skip the gay male stories; they don't do much for me.)

I like this series better than anything else I've read here and better than a lot of what I've actually paid for, including mainstream (non-erotic) fiction.

I registered just so I could vote for these stories and leave this comment.

Joe, have you turned pro yet? If not, what are you waiting for?

I personally love this series, and the 2 or 3 others modeled after it by other authors, but it's a real shame none of them have seen fit to update in a few years. I really WOULD love to see the end of these series. It's a real disappointment that I won't.

...but the dude needs to stop fainting all the time.

Thanks

very good story!

This was freaking hot and I like your writing style. Looking forward to the rest of the series.

I like genie stories. Thanks for your effort.

We could use a little more background on the Genie, and on how the box came into his possession, but that may come later. This could be interesting.

could he wish to remain eternally youthful? or stop aging for 24 hours after sex each time? or become 24 hours closer towards his sexual prime every time he has sex so long as he is past it?

Very hot! Very well written!

Awesome story reading this for the fifth time !!!

Should stop using the I must be a sleep theory. I know this is fantasy but a little reality where possible will make it feel better to a reader. You can tell if you’re in a dream or awake. Good stuff though. Don’t take this in a mean way, it’s not.

Please, please, PLEASE continue! Every time I find a great story to get into, I am left hanging...

Always nice to meet new people.