All Comments on 'Genie Chronicles Ch. 17'

This was great!

Like other readers, I was starting to grow weary of a bit too much computer networking exposition and not enough sex... and so this was awesome. Let's see more fantasies!

That was great. Please don't take too long for the next one. I don't mind the exposition, I like the buildup, I always know something good is coming soon

Excellent story as always!

Wow. That felt like a completely different story. I got lost in it, and almost forgot it was part of the Genie Chronicles. Keep up the good work.

This is one of the best series I've read in ages. There's excellent character development, believable sex scenes, and an engaging story line. Well done, Joe!

john-the-author

Let's hear it for all us nerds out there!!!!

lol

he should meet mary in "real life"

Gods above, the thoughts I'd have with this...

This was great, how many times I thought about my crushes in this way, maybe not with all the details but wow. Very well conceived and it took me by surprise. I'm also really enjoying the tech aspects of the story in FI and Alice Cooper oh wait those are two separate people... Ms. Cooper, looking forward to that. I like how you really gave her a heavy dose of humanity, the poor thing.

I have to admit I'd probably shamelessly use the fantasies with scenarios where I run into the knock-out Genie and she blows my mind all over again (among other things). You know, bring bedroom play up to the next level. And to all those booing me saying it's a waste: shove off. I'm a sentimentalist and a romantic at heart. Too sappy for the real world. THAT'S WHY I LIVE HERE! :-P

The Insipid Sap,

DJ

I really wish you were to pick up this story line and continue this extremely well written erotic fiction, it's so good! Thank you for 28 amazing chapters!

Nice excursion, a classic fantasy