All Comments on 'Germanic'

Loved reading this story, hope to read the next chapter soon.

more please

I hope you write a second one, I hope it is up later today or tonight. this is too good to go unfinished!!!!!!!!!

follow up please.it's a great story.

I hope there is going to be more. Great first chapter can't wait for the next installment.

The rest is available elsewhere, please email me at kannemeinel@aim.com if you would like to know...

btw, I KNOW the German is awkward, it is SUPPOSED to be as the story progresses and the character learns the language better from her 'student' German it ALL changes....including the story itself, lol <wink> Another teaser for my followers to read MORE!

Thank you!

Yes Please More Great story

I very much enjoyed your story and I look forward to it continuin...

Email me so I can tell you where...I don't 'advertise' it here because that would be disrespectful to Literotica.

The completed book IS available though...

Kannemeinel@aim.com

Or have someone do it for you. Or if you don't know enough German, write the story do you don't make the German characters talk in their own language. As it stands it's sort of weird.

I can be of help if you want (speaking German nonstop for +10 years).

Very good story...I enjoyed it greatly!

i hate that shes trying to just run away- please dont allow her to simply ignore lydia

But this story...not so much. Two things. First, the use of Deutsch mixed throughout I found off-putting. To have to "read around" it so much is distracting. A little at the front.

Second, the bouncing back and forth between Lydia and Ana I didn't like either. It's difficult to make me, the reader, love both of them AND you.

Maybe this is just me on both of these counts but felt the need to express.

I like your stories but I don't like being teased in the middle of a story when it ends like this.

It will be fun hunting the internet for your books.

Have great day and take care

but i thought it was beautiful! the use of the german language in parts gave a sense or realism. i dont know german at all let alone well enough to say if it was accurate or not, and i feel that would be the consensus of any other reader who doesnt know german. i do hope that the next chapter will have a happier ending but if lydia knew her family might not accept what had happend tween her and ana, why did she do what she did? she should have just kept the greeting to a simple hug til she knew how the family would react. she already had a bomb to drop on ana since ana didnt know she was a baroness, let alone rich! but then, wheres the drama in that right? well done K!!!

This is a terrific start to a story. The scope of the action geographically and intellectually is liberating. I hope the American end of the family can open their minds and accept Ana's happiness. I look forward to having my hopes realised.

more please , that was a awsome story .. carn't wait for part 2 ...

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I just finished ;Germanic'. Terrific novel. Quite a few surprises. Highly recommend reading to all.

A very enjoyable read, even this old fart had her pad wet enough to believe that with the help of her fingers there was still some life in my snatch while I orgasm-ed. But as an Australian great-grandmother it takes a good story to make any impression. I came when as I knew that any Yankee would being embarrassed for what comes naturally, in the final lines. From my days as a Dutch newcomer into this country I love, I never took one step backwards so what you are bi sexual or Lesbian have a life. Looking forward reading about the day you find it. From a real Australian Mom, bisexual etc.etc.

I made a video of this story as well. As I cannot NAME the video sight (think which is the most popular) due to Literotica's regulations...you can email me if you can't figure out what I mean.

Very good. More please.

please put another part.........let lydia explain to ana, about herself.............let them be together please............more.

Is elsewhere....email me!

i loved the detail and the unique switching back and forth between characters, which is hard to do i know so cheers! my email is fighting_knight_sca@yahoo.com if you can send me the link to the other part please??

... is on the web. Buy it. It's worth it. Probably the best story I've read (or part read!) on here.

In suspense...wanting more!

I really enjoyed this, can you please email the link for part 2?

I really want to read the second part. pleasewrite the second part. This was really amazingly.i totally Enjoyed it. Keep. Up the good work

I had to come back to see if part 2 was up. May you pleaaaase post it?!?!?!?! This story is sooooooo good. (Yeah I'm a bit desperate..lol)

Email me

one of the best stories can't wait for more

Love this story. Please post/write chapter 2. Dying to read it!!!

PLEASE!!

i hope our time in waiting for the sequel of this story will not be put in vain.(cinder)

einfach das beste!

Please, do a second chapter..... It's such a good story and I want to know what happen next >.< I'm begging you just do another part......

..kinda makes me want to purchase the e book

This is an enjoyable story but marred by a several things which could have been avoided with care. Firstly, your switches between Ana's and Lydia's viewpoints in the first person come without warning---much better to have given them clear breaks or chapter headings. Secondly, nearing the end of the story, you are telling it from Lydia's viewpoint but abruptly switch from a first person narration to third person. Then at another point in the story, you switch tenses from past to present to past again. No matter which person and tense you intend to use, be consistent. A final minor quibble: when speaking German, Munich is Munchen. I gave you four stars for the story---without these avoidable errors I would have happily given you five stars.

Chapter 2 please!!!!!!!!!

She has been "outed" either way, so there is no covering up. She has to overcome her anger and salvage her relationship with Lydia, even if it further embarrasses her with her family. Neither woman has been completely honest with the other, and they both need to come clean if their relationship is to survive.

Please dont leave me hanging,

continue

What happened?? I need the next chapter please!!

I really, really like this story! Please write the next chapter 2. (I would love to see a happy ending just because I'm a romantic and I think every story should end with a happy ending (I know, not like real life, but it's a departure from my own life!). Oh, I'm also from German heritage. I lived and went to school in Germany for 3 years, my brother was born there, so this story has special meaning to me.

Thank you again, please write more!

JS

What happened??? Next chapter please

What happened... such a disappointment.

I really really hate stories like this.

I fully realise that things happen, I`ve even noticed a few authors have sadly passed away part way through a story, and I genuinely hope this is not the case here.

If you are still with us, please finish this story.

Sadly it seems this is just an advertisement for the full book :(

I enjoyed this chapter as both the story line and the location grabbed me. The ancestor's of my Mother's father & Mother and their parents immigrated from Germany during the 19th century. I was stationed in Germany for 30 months, 24 of which were in Bavaria (Grafenwohr). I was surprised when the tourist trip did not include Heidelburg.

I am looking forward to reading the next chapter to see where the adventure of Baroness Lydia & Ana goes.

Chapter one excellent, so where's chapter Two

For a fun little hobby story, posted for free at Lit this wasn't all that bad. So i looked up if there was possibly a second part, and oh boy ... charging 7,99 bucks for this mess of VERY garbled german and strange misconceptions about culture and customs is a very bold move at best. This story is hours of hard editing away from being suited for paid publishing.

Chapter 2 😭😭😭 I need an ending to this story. I love it 🥺🥺🥺

The previous comment from alexwatson62 is correct this is in excerpt or bit from a novel that the author has published.