by RoseWilder
You've captured very well the nature of a true D/s relationship, the give and take between the Dominant and the submissive. You also balanced well the description of both the control and erotic nature of their relationship. I look forward to reading more about Jacqueline and Victoria's relationship.
You truly captured the reader and kept them enthralled and interested for the whole story. A very well written piece. You explored areas that are normally only touched upon and kept the roles real. Exceptional.
A wonderful capturing of the scene, emotions and actions. So many seem to think that D/s is simply a matter of a Dom/me controlling their submissive, however the true relationship comes with love and trust. Thank you.
That was amazing. I'm not usually into girl-girl stuff, but that was.. Wow. That's all I can say. Good job!
I just love this story , can't stop reading it. I hope you have a resent one about Jackie and Victoria . I think the other readers would like it too.
Oh Wow! For all those looking for your hot lesbian romance fix, give this author a read.
Love the characters and plot. So loving and sexy,
Thanks for the Great Story!
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