Get Up! To Get Down! Ch. 01

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After 322 years I have finally found her! I've heard the stories of old that state when you find your mate you will know. You will know this pull to be the strongest force you have ever felt in your life. To leave, deny or fail to protect your mate will literally kill you in one form or another. The day you set eyes on your mate your life will change for the better and your true purpose will shine. I now know this all as true.

From the 1st moment I saw her walk toward me I felt and knew she was the one. My one. It wasn't enough to see her body was one designed for a man in my case a vampire to find comfort and to let all inhibitions out to. My mate I believe I heard her say internally Katia is one hell of a woman.

Even in my many years of bachelorhood I've always been swayed toward more voluptuous women. Her bosom is oh so full with a waist that begs to be held on to. Her Hips are well rounded that practically screams to bare my children. Her legs are so long that all I can imagine is them wrapped around me as I give her what her body and soul has been searching for since she has became a woman. And that lovely round bottom of hers just calls to me to worship her in all ways infinitely possible. To think that anymore perfection could be given to a mere mortal is unperceivable or so I once thought.

When she looked me in the eyes for the 1st time I thought I was going to die for what I saw. My mate, my one is the most beautiful woman I have ever laid eyes on. And this is saying a lot. For throughout my 322 years my eyes have seen thousands of beautiful women from many different backgrounds. But right now in this desolate parking lot none can compare to her.

Her skin reminds me of warmed silken caramel. Her big brown eyes just disarm me. Never once have I met a woman that I felt I could lose myself into just through what she assumes to be an innocent gaze. She has such the cutest little nose and the most delectable, full lush mouth. All of these unforgettable features are set in her beautiful heart shaped face. The fates have chosen well for me and for that I 'am eternally grateful.

Ahhh I guess I should say something because my mate is about to give herself a headache.

"Katia darling follow me."He said as he tugged at my hand.

"Where are we going? Something tells me I should have worn my comfortable heels..."

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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Yucky

Please edit and leave the repetitive ebonics on the sidelines. It makes your story tacky. As if a gay flamer is explaining directions to a homophobe. Looking forward to reading the edited version. Thanks for sharing.

swear_toobobswear_toobobalmost 10 years ago
Love your story

You just say "like" a lot and it's not need it and it became a little annoying but still a wonderful you should continue it.

MinxieleeMinxieleeover 10 years ago
I agree

cut back on the black slang, I cant wait for new update I like it

black_maestrablack_maestraover 11 years ago
cut back on black slang/lingo

some of the phrases you use are distractions from the monologue and dialogue. I like this story like someone said an Italian vampire and a black human woman... different. I wish there were more interracial romances featuring black woman. but back to the slang, turn it way downa notch. the paragraph where she announces 'crack is whack' and 'boo boo the fool' that sounds so immature for her age. I could be wrong, but that is a conversation for girlfriends and family members, some random white guy she just met. she could have said..."Look I appreciate your offer, but really, I don't know you from Adam; and I'm definitely not trying to be listed on a milk carton under lost but not found," just a suggestion, I through that milk carton in for your ration of slang. please look at this as constructive criticism, I do like your idea for the story! :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
great story

at first it was boring, like they were rumbling on about nothing then when she met him. then it became great to read.

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