All Comments on 'Getting Coached by Mr. Hawkins'

Now write the next chapter and get what you were thinking about before Mr. Hawkins opened the shower curtain. There's only one first fuck. Make it a good one.

I really enjoyed this story, you did a great job writing it. Hope you have more chapters coming. This was so hot. 5 STARS for sure.

Reminds me of my old coach...shudders...is this what passes for erotica now?

Reminds me of the gym teachers in high school! Never dd anything with them, but I routinely saw hairy chests and abs, muscular chests and legs, and an occasional jock strap and even a hard on or two. Always drooled and dreamed about sucking them and being sucked off by them. It never happened, but it fed many dreams!

Very well written and well paced. I was nearly there when the chapter ended! 5 stars.