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Before she swallowed, she opened her mouth and showed them her cum-filled mouth, and then swallowed. Each time they saw this, the next mad was ready.
After plenty of orgasms, and a belly fill of semen and sperm from all seven of them, she felt content. She fell asleep with her ass and belly full of fourteen loads of cum, and the thought pleased her.
Then she had a dream about going inside a gas station naked.
- COMMENTS
MyHotSlutWifeover 7 years agoFirst, I want to say thank you for continuing the story of Raven. The first 2 installments where well thought out plausible story lines despite the cartoonish names. Unfortunately this one in my opinion falls short of what you had Raven being. You turned a proud sexy young Hispanic college student into the equivalent of a meth addicted lot lizard. The thought of Raven pulling a train over the toilet of a truck stop men's room wasn't very appealing . Then you had her giving bj's in a mini van to 6 grown men. That in itself should put this story in the "Sci-Fi" section. I'm sorry I like my erotica to have a sibilance of plausibility. This had none and Raven deserves more than that don't you think? I will hope that in the next installment you could jettison all the guys except Jack & Hammer. Too many guy's just clutters the story line. I like the idea of Raven going into a gas station nude. Maybe you could play off that to have her dancing in a Gentleman's Club amateur night in Las Vegas. Please keep writing.
