All Comments on 'Getting in the Groove Ch. 01'

good start, looking forward to the next chapter

A very good start, but way too short. Don't let us wait too long for what will inevitably happen

Your story line has real possibilities, but you really need to work on your grammar. You keep jumping back and forth between first and third person. Make up your mind.

keep it to one point of view and for gods sake use a good editor.

i wish the usless webmasters would demand that all stories go through editors before posting they are letting this site go to hell.

You can be 100% certain that when you go from "I" to "his" in the first twelve words, very few people are going to bother reading any further.

That was NOT an ending. Way too short.

that's so funny, all these fat guys jacking off while reading stories on the internet think they're so good they'll just criticize the hell out of someone's first submission... you're like snobby winos... get a life losers, anyone can learn grammar, but not everyone can tell a story... this is good, keep it up!

Definitely good, interesting 1st chapter! Keep it up!

My cock is hard and ready for more!!!

Great start!

Very good start! Looking forward to chapter 2....

your story was just getting intresting & then it ends.please continue

either finish it properly or delete it but don't leave it like this. half a story ( and this was less than half) is worse than no story at all so either finish or delete NOW!!

the groove this kid should be getting into is the one between his own mother's legs. Just try it, guys. There is nothing in the world like fucking your own dear mom.

where's the rest f it?