by _Baubo_
Did you bother to proof read this mess? I read several passages twice and STILL didn't understand what you had in mind. Poorly written drivel.
This was definitely one of the most unique stories I've ever read, of erotica or otherwise. It was long enough to be thoroughly explained, yet brief enough that it didn't just devolve into repetition and you spared us some of the nastiest aspects you could have chosen to explore, that would have taken away from the eroticism (thank you). I think it might have been better suited to "Erotic Horror", "Sci-Fi & Fantasy", or even "NonConsent/Reluctance" rather than "Fetish" - femdom, but that's just my own opinion.