All Comments on 'Getting Jack Ch. 01: Scharza'

by RoryOmore

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holliday1960holliday1960over 6 years ago
This looks very promising...

Enjoyed this. Can't wait to read more. Nice job!

Brett78xBrett78xover 6 years ago
Tantalizing start to your story!

Well crafted; drawing me into the story. Loved the twist at the end. I reckon I'll have to come back for the follow ups.

RoryOmoreRoryOmoreover 6 years agoAuthor
Thanks for reading

Lots more to come, hope I can hold your interest.

Rory

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