All Comments on 'Getting Out of a DUI'

Love the way this was told, how you worked into it, and how you kept me wanting more and more throughout. An excellent job of writing erotica. Thanks. Will be reading more of your work. Thanks for the superb effort!

Well written ! The intensity escalated with each encounter. Her cop buddy ,Clark, was well utilized as transition and fell into enigmatic, gray zone in terms of was he a scum bunny or decent guy indulging in narrator's weakness. Did he really care? Maybe , maybe not. Full marks. *****

Really well written. I hope you keep writing.

Excellent stuff!

Very nicely written.

Way above the standard here.

To be even better, it could use some elaboration, especially around what feelings and sensations the protagonist experienced as well as more details about the setup and characters.

It should be continued.