All Comments on 'Getting Shelly'

Not a bad start for your first story. Like the main characher, however, it felt a bit premature. Little more description about the acts or the people may help a litte.

Difficult to understand that first comment. This is a great start. Good story line, good dialog and very realistic portrayal of the sex act. All in all this is very good pornographic writing. The author has made a great start, one she may be proud of. I hope she continues to contribute.