All Comments on 'Getting the Story'

What a delightful, erotic read. This story captured my attention with equal amounts of juicy, descriptive sex and plot changes smoothly melded into the story of the day(week?).

One can only hope that Ms. Lindsay requires reams and reams of notes before completing her piece(puns intended). Thanks for the wonderful read.

Great narrative and hot sex all tied in with someone who actually has command of the language. Well done!

You have created an interesting start to this story. There is an opportunity to build more stories. I think we should hear CFO's side of the story.

Very erotic and very well written.

Marvy, baby. Just marvy.

I was torn by thinking this was over written for porn but impressed by the quality of writing (for porn). Nice work overall. Not sure I'd have read this if it didn't have the sex in it. See I'm not one for this CFO, CEO crap. Couldn't care less about them.

None the less the economic superman ~vs~ lois lane stereotype works as a backdrop for sex.

Nice construction and clean clear editing.

Go forth and make orgasmic story.

And remember...

Marvy

Hope there is more to come. It's really fluid and a page turner! You've got many people in the Board of Directors to bring down.