All Comments on 'Getting There Ch. 03'

by drowsywithdelight

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LoneStarRiderLoneStarRideralmost 13 years ago
uh, oh!

Train wreck coming. (Good plot device; hope you have a plan to "fix" it.)

lili82lili82almost 13 years ago
oh, crap!

this is not a good situation coming up! can't wait for ch. 4!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

Good story. But, artificial suspense is galling.

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