All Comments on 'Getting Through to Paige'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Well Done

Nice background and excellent lead in. Overall a great erotic story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Nice Job

Very well done. I tend to avoid anything more than two pages but this just kept me going and going. Even the long lead in was engaging.

wafflemtlwafflemtlover 15 years ago
Love it.

Thanks for the fun, I needed it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Well written!

Very well written and erotic, especially the part between the struggle on the bed and the first kiss.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Great Read!!!

Had me captivated, really good story!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Holy crap

5 stars isn't enough. Keep writing, your amazing at it. I was really into your build up. Perfect in every way.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Almost

Almost there. It was a fine plot overall, but the marijuana references didn't seem consistent with two characters that were too reserved to admit attractions earlier than they were revealed. The joint references seemed thrown in there to try to sound cool rather than as a settles part of the story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Not gonna lie if you were to turn this into a proper story like 50 shades of grey it would be great and I would buy your book

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