All Comments on 'Getting to Know Alan and Sheryl'

by pacman82

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Great story

Great story. Easy to read and held my intrest. Look forward to more of your writings.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Top story

Well written, great flow, and compelling characters. Actually could not stop reading. Look forward to future work.

SC

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Agreed with other comments

You wrote a story that was actually decent with out the blunt I came, I saw, I conquered mentality that a lot of writers apply to their characters. It was subtle and built up nicely to be a fulfilling story to the end.

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichalmost 12 years ago
A really good story

It was really erotic to think of all of the things the little imp Sheryl did to him while her husband was near by.

You certainly couldn't denigh a sweet sexy woman like she is if she wanted to blow or fuck you.

Thanks for the great read.

bigtitties32DDbigtitties32DDalmost 12 years ago
So sexy ;)

That was hot!! ;) naughty housewife and sexy other man. You know how to write a story

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Wow!

This is the best kind of slut wife - the type that enjoys the act of cheating, besides just the sex. Please continue to write.

hotjimmyhotjimmyover 11 years ago

very very hot, love this story. Love the wife being exposed near the husband. Please write more

DougntexasDougntexasover 10 years ago
DougNTexas

Great story, i love it. Keep writing please.

Doug

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Too bad we won't get anymore from this author but I am glad we got what we got.

Anonymous
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